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Analog Dreams
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Belarus
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 Posted - 2007/09/16 : 00:59:25
i have been djing for 3-4 months, have been producing in fruity loops 3.4 for about the same time....nothing professional just messing around, i've been told my tracks are pure cheese, and i agree. give it a listen anyways and let me know...! thanks
http://traintrackmaniac.googlepages.com/thisismysound.mp3
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novaboy
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Posted - 2007/09/16 : 03:30:31
pure cheese ay?
lemme have a listen.
the synth was alrite at the start, i really really loved the next bit, maybe change the clap. when the kick come in its good, maybe a stab or something? good happy melody. it got a little minimal, maybe change it around more, and add more synths or something. structure needs work. but its amazing for 3 to 4 months.
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Analog Dreams
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Belarus
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Posted - 2007/09/16 : 16:34:30
thanks man, check this one out aswell if you have time!
http://traintrackmaniac.googlepages.com/rudefireball
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/09/16 : 18:10:37
Damn. I sucked at 3-4 months into producing (then again, I had no idea what I was doing and was just looping.) This is actually pretty good (if in no way shape or form my style of music). Definitely bringing the cheese. Some suggestions though:
More changeup in the lead.
Definitely needs a pad sound in there. A good major 6th chord gets a nice and cheesy sound.
Work on your structure. The breakdown doesn't have enough power, and all in all, there isn't enough of a "flow" (for lack of a better term.)
Still, pretty good, and amazing for 4 months.
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Analog Dreams
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Belarus
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Posted - 2007/09/16 : 18:42:24
thanks guys, the feedback im getting here is alot different on djforums...haha
i appreciate it, thanks
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