Remember a few months ago I wrote a story about some people involved in the rave scene Well it is finished now and up on a site called Smashwords Feel free to

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 21:27:26

Remember a few months ago I wrote a story about some people involved in the rave scene? Well, it is finished now and up on a site called Smashwords.

Feel free to give it a read if anyone is interested:

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/584146

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The story was written by myself between November 2014 - September 2015 and is fictional but based on experiences that I had when I was younger.

The story contains some offensive language, numerous drug references and incidents of depression, mental health and self harm.

For more information contact me at: [email protected]

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Four young adults are involved in their local rave scene, and while the scene has excitement, there is a dark side to it. Bradley is introduced to ecstasy by his girlfriend Nikki and has the time of his life. However Nikki is more complicated than she seems with an unhealthy interest in her former boyfriend Josh who himself is a raver and has introduced his new girlfriend named Jennifer to the same drugs.

Things might seem complicated after Nikki and Josh get talking again which makes things hard for Bradley and Jennifer who find it hard to let things go. However after later being introduced to each other, Bradley and Jennifer start talking and realise that they have more in common than their previously would have thought.

I also have four videos for anyone to watch if they are interested as well, all made with The Sims 3

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Vladel
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 21:54:02

your shit crashed firefox, emphasis on the word shit.

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 22:01:10

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Originally posted by Vladel:
your shit crashed firefox, emphasis on the word shit.

You what?

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arpz
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 22:02:50

I sort of want to read the story but do I really have to sign up to this shit to do so?

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Vladel
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 22:05:08

what was the point in all that?

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/23 : 22:25:28

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Originally posted by arpz:
I sort of want to read the story but do I really have to sign up to this shit to do so?

You probably have to sign up but the story is free to read so you don't have to worry about paying anything but the four videos are there as well if you just want to watch it quickly, they are around 15 minutes each and feature some music

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choonland
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 03:29:23

Whats the tune in the first video, around 4:10?

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DjZelous
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 03:45:06

Finished the first video, It all seems interesting! on the way to school on the bus ill give the book a read!

What are some tracks you used in the video? they are all pretty good!

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 12:29:47

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Originally posted by choonland:
Whats the tune in the first video, around 4:10?

That tune is Jinny - Feel the Rhythm (USSUR Mix)

The track listing is at the end and on Youtube

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 12:31:08

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Originally posted by DjZelous:
Finished the first video, It all seems interesting! on the way to school on the bus ill give the book a read!

What are some tracks you used in the video? they are all pretty good!

Thanks for the feedback

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DjZelous
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 18:33:07

Im not a huge reader but man you did it well! I read the sample off my phone and i must say you are one hell of a writer. It was super easy to visualize all the things happening and stuff. I dont do drugs and dont plan on it but i cant lie, that story sounded hella fun!
Good job mate

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Smoogie
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Posted - 2015/10/27 : 22:19:03

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Originally posted by DjZelous:
Im not a huge reader but man you did it well! I read the sample off my phone and i must say you are one hell of a writer. It was super easy to visualize all the things happening and stuff. I dont do drugs and dont plan on it but i cant lie, that story sounded hella fun!
Good job mate

Thanks for the feedback!