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Ryan_Guppy
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2007/03/24 : 00:10:04
been working on this part of my track :
http://media.putfile.com/me-17-56
need some feedback , get really down when listening to other peoples stuff so good etc , you know how it it .
any comments appreciated
cheers
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Shades
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Posted - 2007/03/24 : 10:38:28
sounds good ry,
i think the synth is a little bassy & your kick needs to be harder (not by much)
were you gonna add vox ?
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/03/24 : 15:51:25
1. A tad sudden, don't you think?
2. General MIDI pianos - always a no no. (Or at the very least, add some delay and reverb to it.)
3. Horrible mixdown. Everything is way too bassy except the bass and the kicks, or at least they're covered up by everything else. Could barely hear the pianos too.
4. Not exactly the most original song. Fun little lick, but it seems like I've heard it somewhere before a million times before
5. You've clearly got some promise as a producer. Remember to keep your sounds seperate, and try to add in things that you're pretty sure nobody's done before.
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